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Roads

I looked at him
while crying,
I knew
there was no use of trying.
You left and moved
towards the wood,
And I stood there,
like you said I should.
Every path I take is black,
I wonder if you ever
going to come back?
Whenever these roads
try to threaten me,
I wish upon him,
but never came he.
I know you closed every door
which led you my way,
Damn!
I still keep my hopes high
for another day.

By Kajal

Hello there, Kajal here! I started blogging in September, 2018. It was purely random as I needed a space to pour my heart and thoughts out. This place is like my safe heaven where I let my fingers and feelings run free to curate poems and to rant about things that are bothering my thoughts. My journey here has been bittersweet and wonderful at the same time. But because of all the love I receive here, I keep coming back to read and to write.You all have been great support and advicers to me and I'm really grateful. Your feedback, emails and comments keep the mermaid inside me going :)

100 replies on “Roads”

I have read a few of your poems that speak of a nebulous β€œhe”, an unreliable love interest. The poems are descriptive of him. How about some poems that focus on YOU without mentioning β€œhim”?. As you search yourself, your poems will begin to say even more. You have a good writing voice that is pleasant to hear. Thank you.

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Really thankful to you for stopping by.
I am planning to right about just me, from a long time. Will probably write soon. Thank you.

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