Every time you’re hurt,
You keep coming,
Your heart,
is a heart,
Others have machines,
just running.
I’m sick of these guess games,
Haven’t you got any other to blame?
Please, stop these claims,
Your agony is a result of,
your own flames.
Kept pushing me,
Whenever I offered help.
Now, when you are drowning in sea,
You choose to Yelp?
I too, have a soul,
But you kept digging hole,
Stop roaming around,
comparing loss or gain.
Regardless of intensity,
pain is pain.
81 replies on “Pain is pain”
Absolutely incredible wonderfully written.
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Thank you so much 😇
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You’re most welcome ☺️
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So true! Pain is pain… 💔
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I hope more people can understand this.
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“regardless of intensity, pain is pain”….you sum it up well!
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Kajal, very nicely said, it have a penetrating realism to me! Love is a high-wire dance these days as there are so many distractions and too many fish in the sea as they say! People are fickle and most are not so loyal to put in the hard work and commitment through all difficulties or circumstances; they too quickly throw in the towel and say move-on! Perhaps in modern times we have gained so many “things” but lost “genuine heart felt love” in the process; a very bad trade off indeed! I would like to be in the old times I sometimes think, but then again who am I kidding I’m so spoiled by these conveniences I’ve become a slave to! But, alas I still do believe and dream of pure unrelenting love, it is so like a unicorn not to be seen, is so extremely rare, also like a very delicate butterfly, so not like this modern world!!!
Lawrence
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Modern world have lost the charm and warmth of pure love and people are not patient enough to wait for what they deserve!
I truly agree with your thoughts here.
Thank you for reading 😇
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You are so correct; and honesty is the best policy to live by but sadly in today’s world there is too much imitation or insincerity always being in a hurry! Hey at least you and I agree with each other! 😉👍
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“Pain is pain’. I do love this!! :)
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Thank you so very much ☺
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You are so welcome!! :)
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In the end, when the storm passes and wounds mend we are faced with choosing, between the inadequacy of our loved one and the loneliness of our pain. Either way indeed my siren, pain is pain.
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Exactly.
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So intense Kajal. Pain is pain…
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Glad you liked☺
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Beautifully penned
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Thank you so very much ☺🌸
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Pleasure always 😊
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Astonishing!! Thank you for sharing! You are truly gifted!
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Thank you so much.
Means a lot 😇
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This is very nice! I could relate to it
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I understand.
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Straight and upfront- loved this post,Kajal!
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Thank you so much for constant support 😇
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oh! so sweet of you!
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Beautifully written. Nice imagery in first lines. Poignant yet thoughtful.😊.
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Thank you so much.
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Yes I did. 😊
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Yep. Pain is pain. Why the hell should you help someone who hurt you? Unless, of course, a car ran over them then I think you should call an ambulance(sorry can’t help but add that)
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This is lit😂
Thank you for reading 🌸
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Pain brings gain :)
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Very positive thought.
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Its my pleasure <3
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No pain, no gain 😜
You’ve expressed pain in such a beautiful way 😊♥️
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Exactly 😅
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‘….Please, stop these claims,
Your agony is a result of,
your own flames..’
Wow.
This is so poignant, but pain is pain
Love the way you write so elegantly always!
This is really amazing Kajal.
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Means a lot 🌸
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Lovely on point
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Powerful share👌♥️keep blogging Kajal🌿
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Welcome 🎄🎶💖🌿
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Lovely!
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So relatable, thank you
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Thank you for reading ☺
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Very nice poem
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome dear
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Marvelous
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Very true… good one
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