I carry you every where
just not in my heart,
And keep losing my mind
at the thought of a new start.
Sleepless nights
and exhausted will,
My soul is lost
at the top of a hill.
You’re the most prominent scar
on my chest,
Keep getting worse
if I stop to rest.
I keep you
at the top of my lungs
as a reminder of what not to breathe,
It keeps me empty and fine
just like a swordless sheath.
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Awesome 🌷
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My pleasure 🌺
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Powerful. Had a painful ragging tone of betrayal.😓 Well written💙💜
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Thank you 💙💜
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I love rhyming verse so much. Thanks to you I know now that the ‘rhymers’ are not extinct yet and rhyming poems not totally ‘out of fashion’
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Thank you, people have their own definitions of poetry ❣
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Amazing as always❤️❤️❤️
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Beautifully written 🖤
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You’re the most prominent scar
on my chest,
Keep getting worse
if I stop to rest.
What a wonderful line
Really awesome😍😍😍
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Means so much ❣
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Beautiful work of words! 💮
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its just WAW!
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Very powerful Kajal, You and your Poem! Insightful and deeply penetrating about the depth of forlorn love’s painful grip on a soul leaving scars that remain hidden from sight. But, also the hope is hidden in there too, that with expectant determination and faith one can rise above the ashes just like the epic Phoenix, a free and boundless spirit of “victory!” God Bless.
Lawrence Morra
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Thank you so much!
You never fail to make me smile.
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Hi there Kajal,
You know you do that to me many times too! I really like that; and I should and will continue to keep a smile on your face; if you can put up with me, LOL!
Again, a very nice poem and you do have a creative sensitivity I truly enjoy; but most of all you are a lovely good Lady!
God bless you and yours!
Peace be with you.
Your friend,
Lawrence
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masterpiece…..
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Insightful and powerful lines dropped beautifully to expressing the pain of betrayal. The guarding of the heart is usually first defense.
Great Post 😊🌸
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Yes.
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You are certainly welcome
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Wonderful ❣️ powerful lines!!
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Thank you, Jyoti ♥
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Always welcome 😊♥️
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Just beautiful!
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Very nice.
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Great 👍
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Exquisite expression, it was truly felt.
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Means so much.
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Nice
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Excellent.
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Thank you, Sunil.
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Liked the metaphorical rendering
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Wonderful lines.. So deep and rhymed..
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Thank you so much :)
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This speaks a soul. Scarred yet still beautiful.
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Amazing 💛
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So deep and surreal potrayal of emotions.
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Wow, this is really deep. I really connected with your words. Beautiful!
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I like your style 😊
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Amazing
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Beautifully expressed
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Welcome
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Wonderful!
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💙❤💙
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Powerfully and beautifully written.
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So good. Congrats 🙂
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POWERFUL WORDS!
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Poignant!
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Wow, powerful word you have put into the universe. Thank you for that, i cant wait to read more.
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Thank you for reading.
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Epic write.
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You definitely write from true experience because you are revealing layers of my heart ❤️
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Amazingly unique!!
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