“Why your poetry seems lost”
She asked me with a hint of pain,
“For I, a universe failed at being world to someone and this thought keep haunting me back and again.
Some days I weave galaxies other days fall down my own black holes,
Get hurt again and again still keep looking for souls.
Perhaps I have become the ocean who keep nurturing, is still saline,
I have stopped fitting in, an initiative to redefine my own boundary lines. ”
~🧜♀
a.mermaid'spen_ 
42 replies on “Saline”
Universe failed at being world to someone 😭❤️❤️❤️
(Nice emoji 🧜♀️ From where did you copy? 🤔)
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❤❤❤
( I copied it from your chat🤣)
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Hehehe 😂
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Poetry can be aimless but never lost. Maybe it applies to you too.
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This is really sweet.
Thank you.
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Wow. Honestly, I love every word of this,.
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Means so much to me.
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Even a thousand galaxies away, I would still feel you, still see you, and still long to be embraced by the rein of your whispered poetry as if it was meant to be for- me, and I would willingly drown a thousand deaths in you.
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Really sweet of you.
I like this comment so much.
Thank you.
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YW. Glad to hear you enjoyed it.
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You kept redefining your boundary lines with the magic of your words and are boundless now
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Thank you for reading.
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Love your poems. This one made me think :)
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Thank you.
I am glad.
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Loved it…❤️
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So glad to know ❤
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Some time the ocean of your thoughts calms down and some times it is filled with storm.🥰💚
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Yes. Exactly.
Thank you for reading 💚
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Beautiful words. I just love love love this.
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Thank you so so much🌻
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I have that same problem. Lovely poem
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I understand.
Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Midnite Crafting .
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Thank you so much.
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This one is amazing, I should check out your blog more often! :)
I nominated you for the sunshine blogger award by the way.
https://auroraborealys.wordpress.com/2019/11/11/sunshine-blogger-award/
Feel free to participate!
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Thank you.
I’m glad to hear from you, but I don’t do awards. Thank you for the nomination though 🌻
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I can’t believe that I read such a masterpiece.
Truly loved it from the bottom of my heart. 💫🤗
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Means so much to me🤗
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Keep swimming mermaid.
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Thank you for reading🌻
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I missed ur poetry for quite a time…
Amazing writing Kajal.. This post seems to me like starting all over again..
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Means so much to me.
Thank you for reading 🌻
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True for so many of us. You absorb so much that you become saline. Sometimes you have to let go. It’s okay.
Outstanding.😊
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True.
Thank you so much 😊
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There you have it- words for the whole world. Always compatible ❣️
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Thank you so much, Samyak❣
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“Someday I weave galaxies…”
Very lovely imagery.
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So glad you liked.
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you.
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“Some days I weave galaxies other days fall down my own black holes” – some lines make the work all worthwhile. Love it!
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Thank you so much.
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