Like clouds and rain
we are supposed to let go pain.
It’s said not to dwell on past
but does mind ever stop?
They command you to
walk on betrayal
then talk about hope.
I know you’re running
out of patience and
have been there myself,
I too am
tired of hearing
songs of disguised elf.
You must be brave though
breathing after blood and war,
You have left flesh
and became poetry
I am proud of you
for coming this far.
~🧜🏻♀
76 replies on “Brave”
Strong…
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Nice.
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Thank you, Manoj.
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Strong.
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Thank you.
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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You’re most welcome my pleasure.
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They command you to walk on betrayal then talk about hope” outstanding lines to depict the hypocrisy of apathy. Still- you are right, one needs to be brave whatever the lesson.
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This world is full of hypocrites.
Thank you for reading.
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I totally agree with you.
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Oh… I love this. Thank you for sharing… just beautiful
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Thank you, Lia.
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Beautifully penned and inspiring.
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So glad you liked.
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You are welcome 😊
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This is beautiful.
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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You’re the poetry ! 🌸
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Youuuu🌸
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You have left flesh and became poetry….damn! these words 👌
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Thank you for reading.
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“You have left flesh
and became poetry” I really like this line.. I like how the “you” could either be the person who has undergone a lot of pain and grief or it could be the pain and grief itself.
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That’s the beauty of words!
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Very thought provoking.
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So beautiful and inspiring 🌷💛
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Thank you, Sarika🌷💛
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My pleasure 💛
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Beautiful as always .
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Thank you so much.
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Incredibly moving.
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Glad you can relate.
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Love it! Felt all the emotion here!
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Do you know my favorite words are brave and breathe? This is awesome!
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Wow! I happy to know.
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It is a hard journey. I am also working on stuff too. I also find it cathartic to expel the pain into poetry.
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It is always best to let the words and pain flow.
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Beautifully bravely blogged…great poetry… 💐Mermaid💐
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Thank you 💐
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You’re most welcome 💐
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I can feel every word of it. ❤
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Means so much to me❤
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That’s so poetic 💙
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Thank you so much 💙
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Lovely, honest poem. Is the artwork yours as well? I love it.
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Thank you.
No, it’s from Pinterest.
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It does enhance your work.
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful 💕
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Thank you 💕
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Pleasure 😊💕
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It’s like the soldier who is going to fight and kill without knowing why he does it. But you have to be brave to get back alive. Verses that breathe the falsehood of today’s world. Magnificent your poem. I loved reading you. Cheers
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Awesome
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Thank you.
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I loved reading this piece, especially for its mellifluous rhythm.
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Thank you so much.
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My pleasure, Mermaid!!
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Loved it.😊. As they say everybody is in a war. He is fighting his own battle as you are fighting yours.
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Exactly. That’s why we should be kind and brave enough to accept the things.
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Beautiful painting… lovely words … Beautiful poetry…keep up great work mermaid🌹
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Painting is from Pinterest ( thank you, though) …. Thank you🌹
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My pleasure always mermaid💐🤗
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So great. . . the opening and closely lines. . . superb
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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I really enjoyed this 🌻
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Yayyy🌻
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