Don’t you hear the leaves singing
endless tale of life?
To live is to know that
you have to let go sometimes.
What if they also
refuse wind’s hand and
join stubborn hearts in strike?
What will be the point of seasons,
all the moments and wasted time?
Let go, breath, forget about
the ones who left,
Fall, fly along with your heart
towards the land of abandoned joy.
Autumn taught me it’s okay to change
Sometimes, it’s must and best,
To be a tree resting in winter
instead of being a volcano to destroy.
~🧜🏻♀
78 replies on “Autumn”
This spoke to me…so beautiful and profound.
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I am so glad🌻
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beautiful!!! ❤ ❤
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♥♥
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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I know what it takes to let go.
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I am sorry.
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Great metaphor and use of symbolism in this piece, excellent poem.
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Thank you so much.
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Just beautiful
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Thank you.
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You’re most welcome my pleasure.
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Lovely said Beautiful hope in change and go with the flow with joyous heart🌹mermaid keep blogging…Have a wonderful day
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Yayyy! You too have a great day.
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Thanks Mermaid
I am enjoying my day…🤗
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Great lines esp. What will be the point of seasons,
all the moments and wasted time?
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So glad you liked.
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Let go, breath, forget about
the ones who left…. ❤️
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Yayy❤
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This was so lovely. Thank you! 😎
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Thank you for reading.
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Nice. True that sometimes change is good for us whether we like it or not.
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Exactly.
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So so so true & you said it beautifully ♥️
(Someone is getting better at Photography 📸)
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Thank you ♥
( someone taught me)
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Hehe 🌸
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Falling in love with your poetry this Fall
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You have been an incredible support ♥
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Love this and you almost made start liking Autumn 😘
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This is really sweet ❤
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Very worldly and captivating, peace
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Lovely picture and verses to go with it!
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Thank you so much.
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This is really good! Keep up the good work.
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Thank you so much.
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Thanks for finding me. I definitely noticed. Lol
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Haha 🌻
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this is really good!
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Thank you 🌻
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Nice :)
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Thank you 🙂
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You are welcome :)
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Reblogged this on CQtheblog.
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Thank you 🌻
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Loved it🌹🌹🌹keep blogging mermaid☘️☘️☘️
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Thank you so much 🌻
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Welcome🌻
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Profound and beautiful
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Thank you so much🌼🤗
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This is so beautiful. So aptly expressed.
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So glad you liked.
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I love this poem. It makes me breathe again 😉
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I am so glad to hear this 🌻
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
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Stubborn hearts in strike, what creativity and flow your words have. I simply love trees, how striking Mermaid. Love ❤️ Joni
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So glad you liked ❤
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AUTUMN DAY DRIVE
by Ramnath Subramanian
Quick the feather flew
Arrow into the heart.
The country stood new.
And in the narrow,
A callow youth stood,
Contemplating manhood.
Grass-high was the boy, now tall wood.
All this and more,
And time marched true;
There was much to adore,
And much to rue.
Quick the feather flew.
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It’s beautiful😍
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You know I had the great opportunity to climb the Taal volcano in the Philippines. I thought for sure that even though it has been dormant for so many years that it would erupt once I climbed to the top. I was sadly disappointed (and relieved lol). I did close my eyes and just let it all wash over me. “I am standing at the top of a volcano.” And then I got tee-shirts and other knick knacks as that is literally the people that live at the base of the volcano’s entire livelihood. Anyway lol, autumn has always been my favorite time of year, especially growing up in northeastern Ohio. The leaves just took my breath away. Take care! I look forward to future posts that I promise not to comment on to a monumental extent, if at all lol.
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Oh wow!
It’s okay.
Thank you.
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‘..it’s ok to change…’ deep, beautiful lines. Live your blog too
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Thank you so much 🌻
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Beautifully written! :)
I could so relate to it ( in fact so much so that I could find words that I myself have written on!)
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Wow!
Thank you for reading.
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A wonderful autumnal beauty and truth!!
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So glad you liked ❤
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You are very welcome!!
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This one really speaks to me for lots of reasons. Thank you for your beautiful poetry.
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Thank you for reading 🌻
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“Autumn taught me it’s okay to change” – this line, so very on point. People are afraid to change but all around us nature changes to adapt to the seasons.
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Thank you for reading.
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Happy Holi Mermaid…Keep blogging…☘️
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Same to you 🌻
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Creativity oozing out the heart of a “mermaid”😍
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Thank youuu
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