Piercing gaze of pines;
So much life on the verge of dying but
Languorous eyes can’t save anyone.
We lose something everyday;
I’m calling us we, though
The Art of losing is really easy.Let’s try to see things as such;
Hearts overflowing with hope always end up as disasters.
Languorous eyes can’t save anyone.
Let’s try to see things as such;
Hearts overflowing with hope always end up as disasters.
Languorous eyes can’t save anyone.
23 replies on “Languorous eyes- Villanelle”
beautiful
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Thank you very much.
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Yes, sadly, we are all losing something everyday.
Your poem expresses this so beautifully.
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I know, right! I’m glad you found this meaningful. Thank you ❤️
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Painful and beautifully expressed, Kajal. ❤️
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Thank you very much, Jeff❤️
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You’re most welcome, Kajal. Always. ❤️
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Amazing photo and wonderful poetry dear poet.
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Thank you, John.
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You are welcome Kajal.
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Beautifully written….”Languorous eyes can’t save anyone” ✨💟💫
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Thank you, Navin.
Hope you’re doing well?
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You’re welcome, Kajal…I’m doing well – thx…hoping the same at your end ✨
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I’m good too. Thank you.
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👏👏 I learned a new word, languorous.
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I’m glad. Hope you liked the poem too.
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I sure did!
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Thank you 😊
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Great lines in the poem with message 👌
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Thank you, Ravindra :))
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Welcome:)
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Wonderful
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Thank you.
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